Corn On The Cob
''very nice accustic harping with lots of effects.I think you ment for it to be real treably and bright,but it is for sure a different tone.''
--Daniel Blues
Corn On The Cob
''The timing was good and did not sound to bad with your Harp playing! net picking it could used little more tone..''
--Bro.Bob
Corn On The Cob
''Nothing wrong with Country, though I do have to go back decades to find my favorites. I remember some good pickers eying my pony tail from the porch of a country store years back saying "we don't play no Led Zeppelin son" :-)''
--Eric Stahl
Corn On The Cob
''Cool bright sound. Playing danced nicely along.''
--Eric Stahl
Corn On The Cob
''Harp sounds a bit like a Kazoo!!! The phrasing, timing, and cadence of your solo is a big step up for you. Keep em coming, nice one!''
--Mark wilson
Corn On The Cob
''BAG,I would listen to your friend next time! But you stuck with this well. Sounds like too much treble in the harp track or something like that (not that I would know - my recording skills are close to zero!)''
--Eric Martin
Corn On The Cob
''Simple effective melody similar to Frosty's. Coming right along.''
--roknwil
Corn On The Cob
''Nearly as good as a crate of Newcastle Brown :)''
--tonedeft
Corn On The Cob
''Hey man, no time to practice, well jam with us anyway! Great job. Although, man that sure is a funny tone. Puts the tin in tin sandwich. But you make it work.''
--Rick
Corn On The Cob
''Interesting melody - crisp notes gave it a definite effect - listened to it a couple of times and liked it more and more each time''
--htrain
Schimm Schamm
''Yes man, I like your tone. Fits the BTrack. You are really coming along. Good melodic work. You might want to think about leaving some silence at the end of your notes. It would change the character of the solo quite a bit though.''
--Rick
Dirty Fingers
''You deserve to go GOLD on this one. Great improvement in your playing.''
--Ringer
Dirty Fingers
''hehe...clever lyrics..wish you would of built on them. harp had some good moments and timing was pretty good.''
--Steph Wilson
Dirty Fingers
''You know, when you sing, the harp tone is perfect because it's tonally in the background. Great job!''
--Rick
Dirty Fingers
''I like the repetetive riffs.''
--harpletunnel
Dirty Fingers
''Sounds like you had fun.Cool vocals and lyrics!Sounds like you are working too hard on harp-using way too much air force.Ease up and don't overpower the reeds or they won't sing.''
--BlueInGreen
Dirty Fingers
''Tough track to fit in to but you did it nicely! The tone was a bit rough and thin. Liked the vocals as well. Good post BAG!''
--Downhome Dave
Schimm Schamm
''Good looong solo's in there bud. Hope ya got all that anger out. :)''
--Mc7
Dirty Fingers
''Liked what you did here - solid vocals and clean accurate harp. Would have liked the harp up a bit and wondered what it would have been like with a gritty amped sound''
--htrain
Dirty Fingers
''Fun ny, Man. great imagination. you got my vote !''
--JB Reed
Dirty Fingers
''Mix or no mix....the main thing is....you put up a listenerble post. watch out for clipping though...very noticable. great vocals''
--Peter Holliman
Dirty Fingers
''I liked it BAG, pretty good playing and the vocals were cool.''
--Lips Angelo
Dirty Fingers
''good groovy playing, the harp sounds a little too sharp edged to me''
--Radiopirat
Dirty Fingers
''I can hear you have practiced those bends they sound a lot more accurate now. great jamming B.A.G! Ob sounds sweet too!''
--Tonyh
Dirty Fingers
''Intensity and timing were good. I did not like too much of the thin sound. Some vibrato would do good.''
--Frosty
Dirty Fingers
''I like your style of playing.there is a lot of solo guitar in this Bt and you fit it in well.''
--Daniel Blues
Dirty Fingers
''Good post. Harp playing is good but I think the mix has your harp to low or delayed, bring to the front some ... you are jammin back there!!''
--BamBamBustaWhyte
Dirty Fingers
'' I like the vocals and the Harp playing,sticky finger saints hmmmmm?''
--Bro.Bob
Schimm Schamm
''You did well with this. There were a couple of spots a little off. Keep on working at it. You've definitely got a knack''
--Downhome Dave
Schimm Schamm
''Somtimes your harp soundet a little off. Playing nice, feeling good!''
--Midnight
Schimm Schamm
''Your beend are getting better:) Your 6 OB is almost in pitch too. Try to play very lightly with your harmonica while still having a good tone. It will help you bend in pitch. Cool bluesy feeling by the way:)!''
--Tonyh
Schimm Schamm
''Got lots of feeling coming through-just pushing too hard (I did that a lot in the past).When you push so hard, you'll stop up your reeds or overbend them.''
--BlueInGreen
Schimm Schamm
''Third position can be tough - it's all part of the learning process for me''
--Ronnie
Schimm Schamm
''Hey - maybe bad day but gutsy sounds man - yeah a couple of rough spots but hey, the rest was solid''
--htrain
Schimm Schamm
''This is different, BAG. Kind of cool.''
--Eric Martin
Schimm Schamm
''Angry indeed! Some notes not very good, but the feeling came through.''
--Frosty
Schimm Schamm
''Got a good feel for the track. Lots of offnote bends though. Try playing shorter licks with space between them.''
--BlueInGreen
Schimm Schamm
''Some real sour notes, maybe intentional. Sure did express your anger.''
--roknwil
Schimm Schamm
''soulful play,yeah,thats the blues,big tone from you.some off bends,but that the deep deep blues.maybe try to add some vibato.enjoyed your personal style o play.lol''
--huhn
Schimm Schamm
''This one was good for me, middle to the end. A little rough in the beggining. Good post.''
--Mc7
Schimm Schamm
''Not at all bad.I think that you are trying to run before you can walk-you are grappling with the instrument rather than controlling it.Learn some simple melodies from notation to familiarise youself with the note layout.''
--Aqua
Schimm Schamm
''Can't be out of your league because this is a learning site. You did a very good job, but watch your timing.''
--Appleman Ed
Schimm Schamm
''Working those bends nicely in there BAG. A couple of the notes sounded like a bagpipe for a second. That's a neutral comment...I'm just sayin' : )''
--Lips Angelo
Schimm Schamm
''there is no league...just blues...I thought this had some good moments throughout....cool work''
--Steph Wilson
Schimm Schamm
''good bluesfeeling feeling with those long moanful notes''
--Radiopirat
Schimm Schamm
''Never sell your self short,I liked your high end work lot you getting there in the short time you have played!''
--Bro.Bob
Schimm Schamm
''Nice laid back feel, and some good musical ideas, although you fell out of sync with the rhythm section at times. Working off the root notes of the chrords would add some polish. Liked that you didn't overplay...''
--Mark wilson
Schimm Schamm
''Don't be knocking your playing! Might have jumped around a little more - dynamics and note choices - but that's just picking hairs - well played.''
--Eric Stahl
Fine Funking Fun
''not the most ear appealing sound..strange, but sounds like you had fun....''
--Steph Wilson
Fine Funking Fun
''Wow, you never know what you're gonna get when you click on these! Great description in your recording notes. Points for creativity. Keep em coming.''
--Downhome Dave
Fine Funking Fun
''Cool sound-but I'm not a huge fan of this type of effect that eliminates the harp sound entirely.Cool vocals!''
--BlueInGreen
Fine Funking Fun
''wow some funky effects in there !! Nice use for it :)! Liked this with great singing!''
--Tonyh
Fine Funking Fun
''Fine fun for sure. :)''
--Mc7
Jazzy Blues
''Hey BAG.. liked the use of the bent notes in there.... careful not to stray into the Off notes though. Good post''
--Peter Holliman
Granite Bay
''Another Swcheeet performance here BAG. Understated but not underplayed. All-in-all a good package....''
--Peter Holliman
Fine Funking Fun
''Not too harpy, but points for creativity....Johnny : )''
--Lips Angelo
Jazzy Blues
''Good try. Not really getting a swing feel that carries along with the btrack. Try listening more to the drums and bass, playing more behind the beat & accenting the strong swing beats of the drums and following the bass for the chord progression''
--BlueInGreen
Jazzy Blues
''Delightful! Well played and full of variety and interest.''
--tonedeft
Fine Funking Fun
''Beelzebub. Had to ask my 22 year old daughter to tell me what LMAO meant. Glad you liked. Sometimes I'm a serious student of the craft, other times just foolin' around.''
--Brown Ale Guy
Fine Funking Fun
''LMAO, been there man, way back in the seventies. Crazy effects, sounds like Hunter Thompson blowing a bagpipe full of helium. Ditto what Huhn said, I'm one average-voiced guy who knows how much the right effects can help singing.''
--BeelzeBob
Fine Funking Fun
''Like ure effort for searching new directions BAG, sounds funky, but for me mis the harp sound, but is personal flavor, good singing and try!!!!!!!''
--RonDutch
Fine Funking Fun
''Hang it out BAG! This one sounds good on second or third listening for some reason. Confident and fun harping.''
--tonedeft
Fine Funking Fun
''liked the vocals the sound effect,did not sound to good my Brother!its got sound like A Harp,OK enough said....''
--Bro.Bob
Fine Funking Fun
''try out a vocoder-efx on the voice too.always welcome on these sound experiments.very special but not bad at all.would have doubled the harp track and added octaver I +II octaves lower.great!''
--huhn
Granite Bay
''Good control and melody''
--htrain
Granite Bay
''(April 12th version) Pitch control of bent and unbent notes is much improved in this one. Nice easy-listening blues.''
--tonedeft
Granite Bay
''Nice going, perhaps back the delay off a little bit.''
--Matt Gunn
Granite Bay
''More relaxed than in the past and some nice groovey bending with the bt timing.''
--BlueInGreen
Granite Bay
''Lots o bending going and some minor timing issues around the 30 second mark, but you're trying to keep it interesting. Maybe a bit too much on the delay for my ears, but to each his own. Keep at it BAG. Improving all the time.''
--Lips Angelo
A Very Mellow Fellow
''Hey man this is not that bad, there are some real good moments in there keep chasing the rabbit...''
--BamBamBustaWhyte
A Very Mellow Fellow
''Good shot at this one BAG. Great practice for that 3 hole too!''
--Lips Angelo
A Very Mellow Fellow
''You're listening and following the flow of the bt well. Maybe take it a piece at a time e.g. play along with Ben's intro over and over until all you're doing is feeling the bt as you play.''
--Eric Stahl
A Very Mellow Fellow
''Good work BAG. Nicely following the theme.''
--BlueInGreen
A Very Mellow Fellow
''Nice job on a difficult task. Felt like in some parts the timing was off a bit''
--htrain
A Very Mellow Fellow
''The intro needed some work. Great try on the high notes.''
--Htmn007
A Very Mellow Fellow
''Ale Guy, good go at it! Iget hollered on ALL the time when mother comes home before I can shut'er down. How are we supposed to turn into rock stars if we can't practice?''
--Ronnie
A Very Mellow Fellow
''Good go at it BAG. I think Ben's right that you were fighting the notes somewhat rather than letting the phrases flow smoothly. You played too hard at times. Lots of good ideas ... send the family out for longer next time! :-)''
--Brett
A Very Mellow Fellow
''You got the intro pretty close with the notes. Just the timing but that was hard to do I must agree. Great exercise isn't it ? you keep improving :)!''
--Tonyh
A Very Mellow Fellow
''I really appriciate you doing this!! The intro may sound simple at first but it isn't because of the timimg. I can hear you fighting the notes. They are there in your head but the next phase is playing them without fighting the notes.. well done!!''
--Ben Bouman
Granite Bay
''Playing ahead of the beat a lot of the time, and vocals were rushed too. Lock in with the drums, and the song will flow better. On harp, simplify, use your harp percussively, & focus of good tone. Then, lots of good things will start to happen.''
--Mark wilson
Granite Bay
''Liked the vocals the Harp did not seem to go with it,still got give you the points for trying! its not so easy to play and sing!''
--Bro.Bob
Granite Bay
''Thanks for comments roknwil. "Embouchure" - looked it up. "Bingo" something substantive to work on.''
--Brown Ale Guy
Granite Bay
''Cool, another vocalist. Brighten the voice with some EQ. Some stops on your harp are out of tune or you need to open up your embouchure.''
--roknwil
Granite Bay
''Not bad! cool lyrics. Cheers''
--Harpn4fun
Granite Bay
''Loved that ryhthm @ :56 and 3:05. Cool lyrics.''
--Mc7
Granite Bay
''great sung and harping.love your voice,could ve been a tad higher in mix.try out to add some reverb on voice-track .great production,mr.!''
--huhn
Granite Bay
''the overblows come at the right place, good song, interesting to listen to!''
--Radiopirat
Granite Bay
''Fun lyrics and pretty fair blowing. Maybe some longer wailing notes would have smoothed this out a bit. Keep em coming.''
--Dean
Granite Bay
''Great lyrics.Delivery/voice reminds me of John Hiatt! Just smooth out delivery a bit to make a little less lilting.Harp playing is good with couple off bends, but it is stepping on the vocals.Stay out of the way of your vocals more.''
--BlueInGreen
Granite Bay
''Yep , I just love storytime! Way to give'er''
--Ronnie
Horny n Saxy
''Yeah, bends out a bit BAG, especially the lead in one. Some of it was pretty cool.''
--Lips Angelo
A Very Mellow Fellow
''Like the vocal stuff - nothing like musician jokes!! nice mellow sounds''
--htrain
Horny n Saxy
''Watch for the bends, some of them seem to be unintented and some otherwise out of tune.''
--Frosty
Horny n Saxy
''Finding some good stuff in there, a couple a little off, just keep workin' it, work it , man, work it!''
--Ronnie
Horny n Saxy
''Some nice melody. tone sounds a little pinched.Is it a handheld mic? I'm not really familiar with the Audix fireball mics, but this sounds like close mic'd acoustic harp.''
--BlueInGreen
Horny n Saxy
''yep,popping out some good obs on 6!try to add some dynamics,your play in itself is flowing well.great use of high reg!''
--huhn
Horny n Saxy
''Has some nice lines and good sound. Agree with the comments on staying with just regular bends and concentrating on flow etc before the overbends. Glad to see you trying it all though. Keep em coming.''
--Dean
Horny n Saxy
''Tone here would be better on an acoustic track, maybe work on cup seal and mouth chamber for this one. Otherwise, some interesting musical ideas.''
--BeelzeBob
Horny n Saxy
''Some great use of the OB in there. Don't push them too hard otherwise your harp will die quickly.OB can be done very gently.''
--Tonyh
Horny n Saxy
''Nice note choice. Very interesting! The tone is a little piercing. Ha ha, I think I am hearing those overblows. Great progress on them. I can't play them at all. So hats off to you!''
--Rick
Horny n Saxy
''Thanks dblues and tonedeft for the polite specific comments. Loved the B-T so much that I couldn't resist trying something with it.''
--Brown Ale Guy
Horny n Saxy
''What to work on: Less of the overblow. On mixing: (Harp) More verb and less treble, possibly tighter cupping of the mic.''
--dblues
Horny n Saxy
''Sounding better B.A.G. All that practise is showing results. Are some notes bent to far down and some normal unbent draw notes played with a slight unintended bend?''
--tonedeft
Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Impressive looog held overblow at the beginning. Try hitting the 6D to the 6D* after popping out of the OB as a starting point for some jazzy riffs.''
--Mark wilson
Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Nice try in 1st and 2nd together,high notes are very hard for me too! way more practice for both of us.''
--Bro.Bob
A Very Mellow Fellow
''I loved this post. I think it would have been improved if you went for a stroll amongst the higher holes at some time in the tune. I enjoyed your laid-back style.''
--Matt Gunn
A Very Mellow Fellow
''The feeling was there. But I agree with BinG - a little overboard on the bending.''
--Eric Stahl
A Very Mellow Fellow
''That was oh so mellow down easy. Nice one bud.''
--Mc7
A Very Mellow Fellow
''Like that talking blues. Good playing-very bluesy, maybe a little overbending.''
--BlueInGreen
A Very Mellow Fellow
''Nice relaxed playing and feeling,litle work on the bends, but overal very nice!!''
--RonDutch
Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Good bluesy actions BAG. Keep your ear on those bent notes and keep them true. Good stuff.''
--Lips Angelo
Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Very soulful feeling. :)''
--Mc7
A Very Mellow Fellow
''shweeet ,relaxed , bluesy''
--huhn
Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''listening to this,you made me appetite on that too.great play,(just a bit more flow here n there),good choice of notes,big fat tone!''
--huhn
Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''I agree with Ron. Try to play more relaxed, especially for the bend notes; It would improve your sound a lot.''
--Appleman Ed
Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Hi Bag, Think you did a fine job,nice flow and licks, try to use less air and play more with using the embrouchure,but that will come in time, like It !!!!!!''
--RonDutch
Im Still Here
''crying harp,sweet chrom and hey,what a big voice!when you sing you have a great vibrato,try to put it in the harp too.''
--huhn
Im Still Here
''nice high end harping,vocals were interesting also.''
--Daniel Blues
Im Still Here
''I got give you points for trying this in 3rd position minors are hard enough to play I should know I'm struggling with them myself I only have one A minor harp to work with for now,keep going and love your vocals! your man after my own heart.''
--Bro.Bob
Im Still Here
''So what did you do to her ... fine song BAG''
--TeeJay
Im Still Here
''Enjoyed it - vocals and harp all very nice. 3rd pos. work is just fine. Keep em coming!''
--Dean
Im Still Here
''Some good 3rd position harp and nice vox.''
--BlueInGreen
Im Still Here
''Cool melody, great tone & mix, fine singing - A1''
--tonedeft
Im Still Here
''You got a very good voice ! Cool playing ! keep them coming !''
--Tonyh
Im Still Here
''sweet Easy listening play and singing!!!''
--RonDutch
Im Still Here
''Respectable work. I am a fan of such soulful playing''
--Midnight
Im Still Here
''Pretty good guy, but are those the copyrighted words to "The Thrill Is Gone"? If so, tis not allowed for legal issues.''
--dblues
Im Still Here
''Fine vocals. I tried this in 3rd position, but not ready yet. You have also some difficulties in finding the right notes. The high register sounds best.''
--Frosty
Im Still Here
''Pretty darn good BAG..... liked the way you used the harps....difficult on these minors. Vocals were the iceing''
--Peter Holliman
Im Still Here
''Way to go BAG - don't sound out of no comfort zone to me, great vocals/lyrics - all singing packages get "A's" from me!!''
--Ronnie
Keep Up
''probably a pretty hard track for anyone to follow. may want to stick with one key until it feels right. good work''
--Steph Wilson
Keep Up
''Hello welcome Brown Ale Guy, good to hear more newbies in here , abit quick off the mark in this post, you practiceing well the high reg is always a mission , good on you for giving them a blast , like the echo effect.''
--DaveyG
Fling And Swing
''Yeah....a bit off here and there BAG. Keep that foot tapping at all time and make sure you listen to the beat and the changes. Got better as you went along man.''
--Lips Angelo
Keep Up
''fine sound; keep workin on timing''
--TeeJay
Keep Up
''Timing wasn't quite there, although when you did find it, things seemed to work pretty well in a rock n roll kind of way. Definitely plenty of good ideas to build of off of.''
--Mark wilson
Keep Up
''Love the throaty tone of the lower notes. Not so sure about the higher ones :)''
--tonedeft
Keep Up
''Sounds like you had some fun here BAG. Keep jamming and learning man!!!''
--Lips Angelo
Fling And Swing
''melodical fine ideas,but youre right it takes a bit for a good groove with the track.keep on posting.''
--huhn
Keep Up
''Some good fast jamming notes and you went to the high ones that I won't even try! but your timing was off and some notes where bit flat on the bends,try recording yourself with out the BT play it back see what you think.''
--Bro.Bob
Keep Up
''You took the chalence to play on this BT, like ure try and searching for your way trough this BT,keep on it, it will come all togheter in time!!''
--RonDutch
Fling And Swing
''You kept time, just emphasize boogie beat more.Try doing simple syncopated comping on strong beats of rhythm, then add in melody.Restate comping throughout.Think I did this on mine on main stage:-).Jake does it great on his versions.''
--BlueInGreen
Keep Up
''Thanks B in G, I think you are right. High stuff, just need to relax it, use less air...''
--Brown Ale Guy
Keep Up
''Good go at this fast one. Some good licks, just need to stay in synch with the bt beat and progression; listen closely and don't go fast expense of staying with the track. High stuff coming, just need to relax it and use less air to smooth it out''
--BlueInGreen
Keep Up
''Some good ideas BAG, some of the notes were off pitch, but you're headed in the right direction.''
--Brett
Keep Up
''cool man :) you stayed with the rythm pretty well and had some great moments ! Looks like you have fun !''
--Tonyh
Keep Up
''big tone,some rhythmflaps,but what the heck,there is power!''
--huhn
Keep Up
''Band that lost its lead guitar let me play along on about 8 songs on harp. Some sorta like "Keep Up". Hard. Loud. Fast. Precision not real necessary at Dusty's.''
--Brown Ale Guy
Keep Up
''Ya stayed with it pretty well. Got dizzy with the ping pong efx even if you didn't do it. So how was the live jam?''
--dblues
Fling And Swing
''fine jam BAG, a lil beside the beat/ swing; good licks in there''
--TeeJay
Fling And Swing
''I liked the rhythms of this harping! Some interesting counter rhythms (?) to the BT whilst still staying with the overall beat.''
--tonedeft
8 bar Blues
''Don't worry about the single take BAG. For me...that happens very seldom. When it does....it's still crap : )''
--Lips Angelo
Got No Valentine Just The Blues
''Some good feeling going on on this one BAG. Also some very good licks forming''
--Peter Holliman
8 bar Blues
''Yup it wont be long before your tredding the boards with the greats. Take your time there's plenty way to go''
--Peter Holliman
Got No Valentine Just The Blues
''Not too bad BAG...lots'o'feeling, but Will's right...bend when you need to and practice the bends so that you hit them right when you do use them. Good effort.''
--Lips Angelo
8 bar Blues
''Yeah...working with the melody and bending notes to fit. Sounding alright BAG.''
--Lips Angelo
8 bar Blues
''You're gettin' there. Don't worry about the single take so much. You're forgiven for a few wrong notes but your bending every note some making the harp sound flat.''
--roknwil
Got No Valentine Just The Blues
''I hear you listening and learning and you've got the right ideas. Often said and I think true here: the more you play the better you're going to sound.''
--Eric Stahl
Strollin With My Baby
''Good feeling for the rhythm and cool voice. You sing a bit like Rockinwil phrasing wise.Harp is best after first vocal line where you are more relaxed.''
--BlueInGreen
Got No Valentine Just The Blues
''Your playing a bit ahead of the beat, but still pretty good harmonica playing. Good effort on the overblows.''
--Appleman Ed
8 bar Blues
''Some offnotes, but fine feel for the track, keep them coming BAG''
--TeeJay
Got No Valentine Just The Blues
''Hi BAG, fine jam, some offnotes and sometimes a lil out of groove. Moodful.''
--TeeJay
Got No Valentine Just The Blues
''Thanks dblues. You were right of course. D harp. Not A. I try to set up for overblows, but don't yet know what I'm doing.''
--Brown Ale Guy
Got No Valentine Just The Blues
''That was pretty good. Have you set the harp up for overblows? I guess you are bound and determined to get those "missing" notes. Keep practicing, you'll develop the necessary control eventually. By the way, I think that was a D harp not an A as you stated''
--dblues
Got No Valentine Just The Blues
''Top marks for improvement - that's a big step up''
--tonedeft
Got No Valentine Just The Blues
''Tried to smooth out the 6ob a little, but still struggling. Just learned the dang thing. Had lots of time so did lots this weekend. May not get another chance for weeks so sorry for filling up the open mic. I'm trying to learn from feedback. Thanks''
--Brown Ale Guy
Strollin With My Baby
''You have a very good potential ! Keep at it man !''
--Tonyh
8 bar Blues
''Great timing and feeling. Working well with the BT. How to avoid the off-notes? I'll ask in the forum and see what the experts say...''
--tonedeft
Strollin With My Baby
''To much effects good vocals some notes are flat!''
--Bro.Bob
Strollin With My Baby
''So many things to get good at isn't there. You'll be amazed a year from now when you look back. Keep on singing too and above all have fun!''
--Downhome Dave
8 bar Blues
''Some off notes in there - but you're on the right track, listening and feeling it.''
--Eric Stahl
Strollin With My Baby
''Sounding better all the time. Vocals are a nice addition here - hope you keep singing on these. Harp is coming along just fine - think you will be amazed at where you can take it with input from some of the pro level guys here.''
--Dean
Strollin With My Baby
''Good shot BAG - watch the bends as others said, to ensure the notes are the correct pitch. Props for singing - I think everyone should at least give it a try! Incidently, what's your favorite brown ale (I'm a long-time beer nut)?''
--Brett
Strollin With My Baby
''Like your feel for it BAG. Some off-notes in and a bit dynamique is missing, try some faster licks. Fine vocals, good song''
--TeeJay
Strollin With My Baby
''Good first attempt with vocals BAG. Not as easy as you'd think eh...hehe.
Harp was fine, but take your time learning bends and how to stop the bend when you're in the right key. Keep at it man.''
--Lips Angelo
Strollin With My Baby
''Some off pitch notes there but you seem to have the idea. Just keep practicing, it comes eventually.''
--dblues
Strollin With My Baby
''Liked the lyrics, but I'm startin to think you have a thing about beer??? My suggestion on your harpin is to have more conviction with your phrasing. A stronger attack and a more concise end to your phrases. You definitely got it goin with the 6ob..''
--Mark wilson
Beta Monkey Stomp
''Some interessting stuff in here ! keep on working my man :) maybe a tad less effects next time plz:P''
--Tonyh
Beta Monkey Stomp
''Wrong key mate-you needed to use G as you are in cross position.''
--Aqua
Beta Monkey Stomp
''Hi BAG, some off-notes and a lil too much effects; listen, you got a feelin for it.''
--TeeJay
Beta Monkey Stomp
''Yeah BAG, good creativity man. Had some good wailing here. Reminded me of me in my first jam here....but better!!''
--Lips Angelo
Beta Monkey Stomp
''that's heavy reverb, but works pretty cool in there.''
--wyred
Beta Monkey Stomp
''Hey Brown Ale (can tell already by your name that I could get along with you!) effects were a bit heavey and I thought got in the way of your playing. Keep on posting, you'll be amazed at how your recording improves after a short period of time.''
--Downhome Dave
Beta Monkey Stomp
''sounded like too much effects - a good start but you will grow in leaps and bounds hanging around here''
--Ronnie
Beta Monkey Stomp
''Welcome Brown Ale Guy! Nice second recording. The effects were a bit overpowering and I think hid your playing somewhat - though I have to say that was a cool bagpipe-like sound at 2:10+''
--Eric Stahl
Beta Monkey Stomp
''not bad at all!bit too much verb/delay,imho,but the playing follows to the bt.try to play with dynamic feel for more tension.good overall''
--huhn
Beta Monkey Stomp
''Hi Brown, good try and nice long notes!!!''
--RonDutch
Beta Monkey Stomp
''Has the right feeling - you're figuring this out plety fast. A few staccato note riffs to add variety with the long wailing might have helped. Delay is a little long and heavy but no biggie. Liked it - keep em coming.''
--Dean
Beta Monkey Stomp
''BAG - good post, a few odd choices for notes, but overall some good blues. A little to heavy of the reverb/delay for me - the harp needs to be a little more forward.''
--Little Kenny
A State Of Mind
''Go ahead and rip one! Man thats some great sounding whailing going on there. :)''
--Mc7
A State Of Mind
''ncie first psot ! you will only get better with time :) keep at it man !''
--Tonyh
A State Of Mind
''Wow - what a start! Sure to improve in various ways song by song, but it sounds like you have a great natural feeling for the "music" already.''
--tonedeft
A State Of Mind
''Hi Brown, your learning proces will speed up here, great people here...good start for your first post... keep them coming!!!!!!!''
--RonDutch
A State Of Mind
''Welcome Brown Ale Guy. Good first post. Try easing up on the air pressure a bit and see how that affects your tone.''
--BlueInGreen
A State Of Mind
''Solid post man, wail-on bro''
--BamBamBustaWhyte
A State Of Mind
''Hey guys, let's give a nice round of applause for Brown Ale Guy. It's not easy navigating the double login for the first time! Great first effort! Sounds like you have really been practicing and got some soul!''
--Rick
A State Of Mind
''Welcome - hope you will stick around and keep sending. This is a fine first post - the long wailing notes carry it through pretty well. Sounds like you are at a point where you can get even better at a rapid rate, and these jams are a great way to do it''
--Dean
A State Of Mind
''Welcome B A G. Good first post and yes...we all screw up here and there. The learning process man. Good stuff.''
--Lips Angelo
A State Of Mind
''try and listen to the backing track more while you are playing. You seem to lose touch with it every now and then.''
--TK
A State Of Mind
''Must have accidentaly clicked on the wrong title.
Good attempt on your first post.''
--dblues
