A Very Mellow Fellow
''good stab man''
   --BamBamBustaWhyte

A Very Mellow Fellow
''I think all the suggestions for improving tone are right. Your tone isn't too bad here. With time you'll let it flow a bit better. You seem to have a pretty good idea of how to get around the harp. Welcome.''
   --Downhome Dave

A Very Mellow Fellow
''I like this version better than your other one ! rythm in the beggining is rushed a bit but this was hard to do !''
   --Tonyh

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Tone isn't bad at allat the moment. Key for big tone is playing with diaphragm. easier to say than to do hehe. Do some breathing exercice each day and it will help alot ! Great feeling by the way:) watchout for some off notes!!''
   --Tonyh

A Very Mellow Fellow
''without bend notes it is hard to play the intro. but still a nice take.Good acoustci sound . In the ending you lost the timing.''
   --Ben Bouman

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Some carefull playing in this one , loosen up and things will improve. Try less treble to tone down your sound if you think its too thin, its not that bad really.''
   --DaveyG

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Your natural tone is excellent for the time you've played. The tighter the seal around the mic when cupped the deeper the tone.''
   --roknwil

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Good job WB...timing seemed a bit off here and there, but it came out pretty well.''
   --Lips Angelo

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Good got at it WB. Some hesitant passages, so work on fluidity between notes and phrases.''
   --Brett

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Nice clean approach to the challenge''
   --htrain

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Nice workin' it. Way to try the challenge. This one pushed me over to Adam Gussow's lessons 3 and 4 on Youtube to work on low notes yesterday. If you haven't checked it out, I recommend it.''
   --Brown Ale Guy

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Nice and melodic WB. Good take.''
   --Lips Angelo

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Sounds good Warbeak. I'm not the guy for tone advice. Struggling and learning myself, but try the Ben challenge on this song over in open mic. If you come close, than tone will improve.''
   --Brown Ale Guy

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Some nice melodic idea.Aqua gave tone suggestion and he is a master.I htink mart of issue is how you are micing.Are you holding that clean mic. Try playing acoustic off the mic or using a different mic maybe?''
   --BlueInGreen

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Your tone doesn't sound bad. Try rolling back the treble on your harp track.''
   --Mark wilson

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Not to bad sound,you need a tube amp or even pig nose amp,try working on longer draw notes with your bends on the low end of the Harp.''
   --Bro.Bob

Caveman Stomp
''you get it,keep posting and playing(and listening) as much as you can!lol ''
   --huhn

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Your tone is not bad. Each note has a nice solid body but masked by the PC mic boosting the higher frequencies. A Low Pass Filter or Equalization in Audacity can balance that. But do see the Forum - Harp Playing Technique - "How do ya get" (scary stuff!)''
   --tonedeft

A Very Mellow Fellow
''Since you ask how to get more tone-learn to use the muscles in your diaphragm,tongue,hands,jaw and throat. Get an instruction course.'Paul Butterfield's Harmonica Masterclass' is the best I know of-unstructured but very insightful.''
   --Aqua

Caveman Stomp
''Great job not playing over the guitar. Good solid notes.''
   --Mc7

Caveman Stomp
''Good following of the rhythm and chords.Maybe volume up a bit high on mic so sound is slightly pinched.''
   --BlueInGreen

Caveman Stomp
''I hear you Peter. I still find myself getting nervous even just recording. Striving for the boos feeling without the the boos.''
   --warbeak

Caveman Stomp
''Good stuff Warbeak..... you got stuck into this one. Maybe coulda let yourself go just a tad more.... have fun..let it all hang out... go man go.....''
   --Peter Holliman

Caveman Stomp
''Like the theme you set - maybe check volume balance between harp and BT ??''
   --htrain

Fling And Swing
''Like the way you worked the melody. from mid point on you were really using some very nice licks and chugs''
   --htrain

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Welcome Warbeak! Good first post. I'd recommend a little more air-flow in the individual notes.''
   --Eric Stahl

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Nice first post, welcome''
   --Appleman Ed

Fling And Swing
''Nice use of the best "effects unit" available (your own playing tone) :)''
   --tonedeft

Fling And Swing
''Good swinging harp playing.''
   --BlueInGreen

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Welcome to the club. How long have you been playing? Nice job...''
   --Mark wilson

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Mighty fine first post, you got the blow notes down! you need to work on few draw notes to polish it off.''
   --Bro.Bob

Fling And Swing
''Good chordin' stuff and rhythm. You stuck with it a lot better than I did.''
   --Brown Ale Guy

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Good first post Warbeak. Ya pecked away nicely at that one.''
   --Lips Angelo

Fling And Swing
''excellent rhythm and chord work,tone was great too.watch your bendings and it becomes perfect soon.very enjoyable lol''
   --huhn

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Welcome warbeak. Good first post. For 16 months you're doing just fine!''
   --Brett

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Lord, i wish my debut had been this good.:0 Smooth playing.''
   --Mc7

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Good debut.The harmonica sounds a bit naked and dry.I couldn't operate Audacity at all.''
   --Aqua

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Off to a good start - hope you keep them coming. Well played - a little shrill on the high notes - maybe some EQ and a little delay would have sweetened it but no biggie.''
   --Dean

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''I'd pay to see this..... good post''
   --Peter Holliman

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''I like your harp playing style. Enjoyed the unexpected new phrases and nice ornaments.''
   --tonedeft

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Solid first post - keep em coming''
   --htrain

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''great 1rst post.breathing music,anything else counts.good one.keep on posting. its a virus''
   --huhn

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''I have been trying to bend but it is a major obstacle for me to conquer. What did you mean RonDutch about learning 12 bar blues? Was my timing and rhythm off some?''
   --warbeak

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Hi Wabeak, nice playing and can hear u play 16 monds, maby it i time for u to learn the 12 bar blues,so you can hear were u are in the music, this was also a good improvement for myself, are u already starting with the bends? Keep on sending new tracks!!''
   --RonDutch

Late Nite At Tonys Lounge
''Welcome in. Enjoy yourself to the max. You have the basics plus. Hard to critique at this time not knowing how long you been playing. Sounded very controlled (like you know what you are doing)!''
   --dblues